Social issue +opinion(90%)
大作文的四个评分标准：
1. Task response -论据充分、合理
2. Coherence&Cohesion
3. Lexical resource -如何展示优秀的词汇量
4. Grammar range
* Response:写一篇6.5 的作文至少要有no less than 4 reasons（不少于四个论点）
* Culture difference:把抽象的问题变具体，不断细分,丰富大量的details（可以同时提高内容和词汇上的表现）
【例】
Some people thinkproducts should be made to last as long as possible, while others thinkmaking products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and express your own opinion.
(2022.11.26)
1) What kinds of products should have longer lifespan ?
furniture, vehicles, electronic devices, flats
a.expensive – bettercost-performance
d.laptop – important in our life – inconvenient to upload and download all the time
2) What kinds ofproducts should be as cheaper as possible?
daily necessities: crops, tissue, medicine
b.consume it in daily life –indispensable in every one’s life
c. financial pressure caused by overpopulation/financial problems, such ashousing/medicine in exorbitant price
Compared with the past ( 50 years ago) :
In general, what has changed? ⬇️features in modern society
A. overpopulation
a. under pressure + fierce competitions – 各种方面： school, business, work
- chronicphysical problems + mental problems
( a company is chronically underfunded)
b. financial issues: push up prices:housing, education, medicine, healthcare
B. People arefinancially secure –compared with elder generations
(xxx are adv + adj people are physically inactive/ mentally stronger)
c. afford a better life: enjoyable : travelling, party, high-price fruits
C. Internet + social media
pro : 1. improve working productivity
2. variety in entertainment
3. information spreads faster
4. creates more job opportunities
cons: 1. to intensify labour exploitation
2. to intensify anxiety
3. to breed cyber crime
4. addiction to social media and game – big data
【例】
Nowadays, young people are becoming richer than before,but they are nothappier. Why? (2021年机考大作文）
结合这种论据方法的技巧： 把所有掌握的知识、会的东西全部展示出来给考官看
compared with decades ago when + 描述过去（一般过去），+描述现在（一般现在）
* 每两句话 都检查一下自己的句子是不是契合主题
E.g.Compared with decades ago when managers could not keep in touch with their employees, nowadays, poor employees have less work-life balance as they are pushed to come back to work while having rests or even distantly. Under this circumstance, excessive workloadsupset/ weary/ irritate young people.
◎论文仿写的两个经典问题
1、如何完成仿写：所有的写作考试本质不是去嵌套信息和句子，通过自己学习到的知识进行分析和创造
TASK 1 ：（1）分析和解构你的图表 （2）运用各种知识分析它
【注意】 可以模仿 – 句子结构和词汇
不可模仿 – 如何分析排序
TASK 2 ：【注意】
可以模仿 – 优秀文章的思路， 优秀的句子，结构和词汇
不可模仿 – 完整的思路，coherence & cohesion
2、如何使用正确的动词：
model oneself on someone, 成为someone的偶像，也可以理解为xxx以某人做榜样，如果变为被动，就是某人被当成了xxx的榜样，sb. is/was considers as a model for someone.
